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The Musicality of Words by ~Deep-Emerald:iconDeep-Emerald:



Words, I find, must have a rhythm
They ought to be placed with care
Though free verse means there is no need
For rhyme or metric feet
Still words must communicate
Through their musicality.

Words, when they are free
May lose musicalit-ness
They stagg-
er and
cut and
trip
Fall unto themselves
With barely a whiff
Of aforementioned pulse.
However, this is not what I would like to do
I find it does not amuse and entertain the reader - you.

Words ought to have a meaning
When written in free verse
They may be formed
Dif-fer-rent-ly
Than we are used to seeing
But that strange form should still
Communicate a sense
Of what the author means it to.

Words are building blocks
Used by the noble poet
The function of a poet
Seems innately to be play
Play with words, play with sounds
Play that lasts all… afternoon

Words can be a sly trap
Ensnaring he who reads
It needn’t be the pretty sonnet
Which the Bard favoured so
‘Tis not to say, however,
That such forms don’t have their place
Simply that each choice
Should be made
With the truest, utmost care.

Words, I find, must have a use
They should not be employed in vain.
Let all your texts reflect this truth
And greatness, you’ll attain.
©2008-2009 ~Deep-Emerald
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Author's Comments

I had originally been waiting to post a whole lot of my uni portfolio writing at once. But seeing as I'm collating my poems to hand them in right now, I figured I'd put this one up.

It's an experimentation with free verse. And being that it's me, I just messed around with words and had fun tripping up the reader.

Tell me what you think.

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:iconbenjafofo:
interesting. I share the same opinion. But something caught my eye in your poem: you say that words, when they are free, "may lose musicalit-ness
They stagg-
er and
cut and
trip
Fall unto themselves
With barely a whiff
Of aforementioned pulse."

but, what if the poet wants the words to "fall unto themselves"? what if words cutting and tripping mean something on the poem? Thats a nice reflection, i think.

Nice poem, kep it up! =)

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:iconamriah:
I really liked this. The fact that you purposefully did some things.

"Words are building blocks
Used by the noble poet
The function of a poet
Seems innately to be play
Play with words, play with sounds
Play that lasts all… afternoon"

Lol, the last line made me giggle.

I can tell you had a lot of fun with this =)

:+fav: for you ^_^

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That was my intention, yes. Thank you very much :aww:

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=P I sure did. Thank you so much for the praise and fav :D

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I liked this one. A lot. I love words, so this really touched me. My favourite was the last stanza.

And I liked the way you discussed the techniques used in poetry at the beginning - lots of people won't understand, but I'm happy to say that I'm one of the ones who does!

"Words can be a sly trap
Ensnaring he who reads"

I happen to like the word 'ensnare', so these two lines evoked a stronger interest in me.

Good job, as always, Jeremy.

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Irresistible.

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Thanks very much, Michelle :aww:

I'm really glad you liked it so much...

And speaking of your love of words, remind me to ask you about something when we see each other next. There's a column for my literary magazine that you may be interested in.

Thanks again :heart:

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Sounds great! :D

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Indescribable beauty.
Irresistible.

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